Hear me out
Before disconnecting the call
Hear me out please
I know I’m not always loud enough
I know I don’t always let on
It’s not your fault
I usually keep to myself
It’s not like you can do anything about it
I tend to hold up just fine
I say I’ll go through it and I usually do
I say yes when I wish I could have said no
It’s not your fault if I lie to myself
But hear me out
Before disconnecting the call
Look out for those gaps in our communication
Please notice my moments of hesitation
For once don’t ask me to do something
For once let me be selfish
Hear me out please
Even if the silence stretches
Even if words fail to make sense
Just wait for me to speak again
Before disconnecting the call
Hear me out please
wow… that is really good.
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Thanks for reading and commenting here! β€
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Great work
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Thanks! It’s special to hear you appreciate this because I love your poems so much! βΊπ
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As I love yours. You are a special poet. Your words touch me. Thank you
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I’m so glad. Thank you again β€
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familiar spirit. enjoyed your piece
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Thanks for reading! I’m glad you enjoyed it β€
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Hi! Iβve nominated you for the Liebster Award (again π ), an award which recognises and encourages emerging or established bloggers and their work to be further discovered by others. I really enjoy reading your blog, and I hope you enjoy participating in the Liebster Award. Please visit my post via this link http://laurenmhancock.com/2020/08/05/the-liebster-award-nomination-discover-more-blogs/ and follow the instructions! π
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Aww thank you so much Lauren! I’m so glad you got nominated, I was upset how we can only select a handful of authors when there are literally so many more I would have loved to add. Sadly, I think I’ll have to pass this nomination since I just posted about it recently. I will however answer your questions in comments under your post! Keep writing and thanks once again! β€β€
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Beautiful!
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Thanks Rishika for reading it! β€
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Wow.Amazing poem.
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Thank you Simran! I’m glad you enjoyed it π
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Thank you for stopping by and I’m so glad I followed you back! This is a lovely poem and a lesson for us all, we need to listen and really hear the unsaid words…
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Yes, I’m so happy that I finally published it on my blog. I agree this is very important indeed. Thank you so much for taking the time out to read my poem and comment such a supportive thought here! β€
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I enjoyed this poem and your expression of the struggle to be heard and also the need to listen patiently. Thank you for calling my attention to your blog
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Thank you for reading and leaving this beautiful comment! Ofcourse, I’ll be visiting your blog. Hope we both inspire each other in the writing journey ππβ€
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I so relate to this! Well written!
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Thanks! I’m glad you relate with it! βΊ
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So beautiful
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Thank you!! βΊ
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My pleasure Shruba π
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This is painful how contradicting we are with ourselves, and it is harsh how we base a full reality on mere expectations. One should indeed listen into the other’s silence and live inside his/her mind before even thinking to have relation.
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Yeah, human minds can be so complex, right? We keep learning and unlearning things all our lives I feel.
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This poem hits my heart in a different kind of way. I really feel it, the want for someone else to please care about you, for once, to realize that something is wrong. But sometimes, people are too busy or with some, too self-absorbed to see it. It hurts. But there’s always someone who cares, never forget that. β₯
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Yess. Thanks for “listening” to me and reading this poem! It means a lot β€
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Of course β€
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We can hear you through this poem now !! A nice read.
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Thanks a lot for reading it. :’)
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Been there.
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I’m glad you relate. Thanks for reading!
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Oo I know the feeling. Nice piece.
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Thanks! I wouldn’t wish anyone to relate but sadly a lot of us do. π€π₯Ί
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There may be some problems due to network issues but some are not using their ears properly ππ
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Perhaps, or perhaps the radio static is too loud for them to hear above the noise. Thanks for reading this and for the overwhelming support on my blog! π€
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This is beautiful!
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Thank you for reading! I’m so glad you liked it βΊππ
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