It crawls inside when you least notice
A slithering invisible stain of grease
It spreads through your mind at ease
Slowly gradually extending its roots
Just a nagging doubt, it questions
And therein begins your descent again
You cannot ignore it, you cannot avoid
Pacing in the room, you are trapped in your mind
You get irritable and everything seems louder
Somehow you blame it on the noises
But you know better, it has got nothing to do with that
Just a persisting question pokes around
How long until this tiny streak of light dissolves?
How long will I be left amid the darkness this time?
Is there really no way to stop it from blowing out?
Is there nothing I can do to hold this fist of sand?
And with the doubts, more sand runs loose
From within the creases of your fingers
Time keeps slipping and you know you lost
Once again, to the cycle that would repeat
Alone in the dark, you would wait until
The tiny candle appears for another night
Another day, maybe this time it will last
Wish upon wish, you forget when you stopped
Waiting for what never really came to be
And just hoped out of habit, routine, nothing else.
*hug*
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Thank you!! π₯Ίπ
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This is wonderfully crafted!!
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Thanks!! Glad you liked it ππ
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Very much so!!! π
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Reblogged this on Time Traveler on the road of Life and commented:
Thought-provoking! I feel like you are peeking in my mind when I have those sleepless nights when I canβt make my mind stop bringing up things I would rather not see.
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Oh thanks for reblogging! I guess we all have such nights, relate with you. Hugs ππ₯Ί
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Honey, are you OK?
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Yes yes, I’m okay. Thanks for checking on me. You’re so kind! πππ
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Wonderful!
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You expressed the feeling of fear in captivating manner. Good one
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Thanks a lot for reading!! It’s a powerful emotion, wanted to capture that. π€
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Welcome. Do explore my blog someday
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Yes, ofcourse!! βΊ
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I love it! Fear is something I know far too well, having done everything I could to avoid facing it. You captured it wonderfully.
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Thanks a lot! I’m so glad you took the time to actually visit my blog and read this. π
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Wow, this was so vivid. I felt that and was uncomfortable in the best possible sort.
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Thanks for reading! That was sort of where I was trying to drive at. I’m glad it worked. π βΊ
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The slithering line was visceral. Reminded me of a part on the book Neverwhere.
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Ohh! I have heard a lot about it but still need to read it. Isn’t that SF genre? My friend makes a comic series inspired by it, called Tales of Everwhere. π€π€©
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More fantasy, but it is a fun read, very interesting characters and feels like Harry Potter.
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Ah, must check it out then! I love fantasy, can’t get enough of all the fantasy series on Netflix lol. Maybe it’s time I get back to reading a few π€©π
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Loved reading this. It’s so detailed and well crafted!
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Thanks Rahul, you’re so encouraging. Glad you enjoyed reading this π₯°π
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Wow!! This was so vivid and capturing. Amazing. Thank you for sharing.
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You are welcome!! It’s a pleasure to have readers like you, so happy you visited my blog! π₯°π
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There’s such a nice flow to it! Really enjoyed reading π
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Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed! ππ
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You’re very welcome! My first of many to be enjoyed no doubt π
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Thanks Dalen, that’s so special! ππ
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My pleasure! π
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